View from the cockpit
On June the 11th it was a man's birthday. So that man went on a ride to the airport to go to a different country, Canada. It was 48 hours until they got there. He did not know that the pilots knew that it was his B-Day. A few minutes later the pilots called his name and he was confused they scared the crap out of him. He said what's going on? They said happy birthday!!! You get to fly anywhere in the world you want in first class and you can even visit the cockpit, he was having the best day of his life until… he got unlimited presents!!! ¨Yay¨ he shouted! He gave the plane a 5-star review and his real name was Taj.
What a brilliant story Taj and the ending just gets better!! When a character speaks, try putting it on a different line eg:
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They said "Happy Birthday!!! you get to fly anywhere in the world."
I hope you had fun writing this piece.
An exciting story Taj. Where would you favourite place be if you could travel?
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