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One day there was a little girl named Brittany who was a big Sports fan. But there was one sport she loved the most it was rugby and she doesn't know why, but she does. Brittany trained and trained for a long time so she could be just like the professionals when Brittany got to college she played girl´s league. She was pretty good but there was one girl she thought was amazing. This concerned Brittany because she thought this girl was going to waste her in a battle of rugby. One day they bumped into each other and Brittany thought she was very kind and they became friends.
You're right- professionals really do need to train a lot! I like the ending how they became friends. To make your writing better Taj you could organise your ideas into paragraphs. Keep up the awesome mahi.
ReplyDeleteHi Taj. Liked your story about Brittany. Shows good perservence on her part and she made a nice friend from it all.
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