An icy plunge. One day there was a cute baby seal that just learned how to swim by itself so every day it would go for a swim in the sea but one day there was a massive pack of Killah wales the baby was swimming as fast as it can but it was too slow but then a great white shark came and attacked the Killah wales next minute there's a fight in the water so all the seals get an advantage to get off the island.
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This is a great story starter Taj. Would love to see more of this. Perhaps if you do continue you could add in some punctuation. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWow Taj, I'm excited to hear more about the life adventures of this little seal. I'm so glad it survived. How do you think the seal felt, or its mumma felt during that scary time. What other descriptive words could you put in to describe the event. Keep it up Taj
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